eap Mailing List: Re: NITS: draft-ietf-eap-keying

[Bernard Aboba (bernard_aboba]

I have made the changes.





-----Original Message-----
From: Lars Eggert [mailto:lars.eggert [at] nokia.com]
Sent: Fri 3/2/2007 5:03 AM
To: Bernard Aboba; Dan Simon; Pasi Eronen; Henrik Levkowetz
Cc: eap-chairs [at] tools.ietf.org; eap-ads [at] tools.ietf.org
Subject: NITS: draft-ietf-eap-keying

Some nits, fix whenever.

Section 1.4., paragraph 4:
>         (MSK), Extended Master Session Key (EMSK), Initiatlization

  Nit: s/Initiatlization/Initialization/


Section 7.1., paragraph 2:
>                Lefkowetz, "Extensible Authentication Protocol (EAP)",

  Nit: s/Lefkowetz,/Levkowetz,/


Section 7.2., paragraph 54:
>                Attributes Suporting Authentication in Point-to-Point

  Nit: s/Suporting/Supporting/


Section 7.2., paragraph 55:
>                Protocol (PPP) and Wireless Local Area Neworks =20
(WLAN)",

  Nit: s/Neworks/Networks/


Appendix A, paragraph 21:
>    of the AT_PEERID attibute and the Server-Id, if available, is

  Nit: s/attibute/attribute/