eap Mailing List: Re: Gen-art review of draft-ietf-eap-keying-18.txt

[Bernard Aboba (bernard_aboba]

I have made the changes.
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From: Gonzalo Camarillo [mailto:Gonzalo.Camarillo [at] ericsson.com]
Sent: Thu 3/29/2007 3:16 AM
To: Bernard Aboba; Dan Simon; pasi.eronen [at] nokia.com; =
henrik [at] levkowetz.com
Cc: Jari Arkko; gen-art [at] ietf.org
Subject: Gen-art review of draft-ietf-eap-keying-18.txt



Hi,

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before
posting a new version of the draft.


Draft: draft-ietf-eap-keying-18.txt
Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo [at] ericsson.com>
Review Date: 27 March 2007

Summary:

This draft is ready for publication as a PS RFC.

Comments:

Abstracts should not contain references.

Reference [IEEE802.11i] is missing.

draft-ietf-msec-gsakmp-sec seems to have already been published as RFC
4535.


Thanks,

Gonzalo