eap Mailing List: Re: issue 375 (Was: Re: review of netsel-05)

[Bari, Farooq (farooq.bari]

Proposed resolution is OK for me.

 
Farooq Bari
 
farooq.bari [at] att.com
+1 425 580 5526
 
 

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Jari Arkko [mailto:jari.arkko [at] piuha.net] 
> Sent: Friday, February 23, 2007 5:27 AM
> To: Bari, Farooq
> Cc: Bernard Aboba; eap [at] frascone.com
> Subject: issue 375 (Was: Re: [eap] review of netsel-05)
> 
> But latest PANA document (ietf-pana-pana) no longer has 
> ISP-Information or NAP-Information, so I think further 
> developments have changed the situation again. Here's the edit:
> 
> Remove text:
> 
>    The PANA protocol [I-D.ietf-pana-pana] has a mechanism to advertise
>    and select "ISPs" through the exchange of the 
> ISP-Information AVP in
>    its initial exchange.
> 
> Change text
> 
>    The use of other network identifiers
>    than domain names is also possible, for instance the PANA protocol
>    uses an a free form string and an SMI Network Management Private
>    Enterprise Code [I-D.ietf-pana-pana], or Mobile Network Codes
>    embedded in NAIs as specified in 3GPP.
> 
> =>
> 
>    The use of other network identifiers
>    than domain names is also possible.
> 
> And remove the reference too.
> 
> Jari
> 
> Bari, Farooq kirjoitti:
> > Regarding 375, I am attaching Ohba san's email on eap 
> reflector from 
> > last year that requested to disregard his previous email. So this 
> > issue seems to be resolved.
> >
> >  
> > Farooq Bari
> >  
> > farooq.bari [at] att.com
> > +1 425 580 5526
> >  
> >  
> >   
> 
> >   
> >> -----Original Message-----
> >> From: Bernard Aboba [mailto:bernard_aboba [at] hotmail.com]
> >> Sent: Wednesday, February 21, 2007 9:47 AM
> >> To: eap [at] frascone.com
> >> Subject: Re: [eap] review of netsel-05
> >>
> >> I have resolved issues 330, 331, 332, 334, 335 and 336 as fixed in 
> >> NETSEL-05.  I am assuming that 333 will be resolved in -06.
> >>
> >> That still leaves Issues 374, 375, 376, 377, and 378 open.
> >>
> >> Can the submitters of those issues look over the document and post 
> >> whether their concerns have been resolved?
> >>
> >> The document is available for inspection here:
> >> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-eap-netsel-prob
> >> lem-05.txt
> >>
> >>     
> >>> Jari Arkko said:
> >>>       
> >>> First, there are some open issues in the issue tracker. I 
> consider 
> >>> issues 330-336 now mostly closed, based on the revisions 
> in the new 
> >>> drafts. Thanks. For issue 333 there is one small remaining
> >>>       
> >> thing, noted
> >>     
> >>> below.
> >>>
> >>> What is the situation with the other issues? They have 
> been made for 
> >>> previous revisions, have they been resolved in -05?
> >>>
> >>> I also re-read the document and noticed two small 
> editorial issues, 
> >>> also noted below.
> >>>
> >>> But otherwise I think the document is ready. Ship it!
> >>>
> >>> Parts remaining from issue 333:
> >>>
> >>>       
> >>>>    Section 4 gives the conclusions
> >>>>    and some suggestions on how to proceed for the rest.
> >>>>         
> >>> This should be: "Section 4 presents our conclusions."
> >>>
> >>> Editorial:
> >>>
> >>>       
> >>>>    discussion of the limitations of certain classes of solution,
> >>>>         
> >>> s/solution/solutions/
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>       
> >>>> The solution ...
> >>>>         
> >>> Multiple occurrences of this. I think the draft should not
> >>>       
> >> assume that
> >>     
> >>> we have a single solution in this space.
> >>> Therefore, we should typically write "Solutions should
> >>>       
> >> satisfy ... " as
> >>     
> >>> opposed to "The solution should satisfy ..."
> >>>       
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