Re: review of netsel-05
From: Jari Arkko (jari.arkkopiuha.net)
Date: Wed, 21 Feb 2007 11:15:17 -0800 (PST)
Bernard,
> That still leaves Issues 374, 375, 376, 377, and 378 open.
>
> Can the submitters of those issues look over the document and post whether 
> their concerns have been resolved?
>
>   

For 374, everything else is addressed except this:

- Page 15: "APs must support 802.1X pre-authentication (optional
in IEEE 802.11i) ". The year of this standard should be specified,
just like it is earlier in that sentence. What is meant here is
probably IEEE 802.11i-2004.
- Page 20: "solutions for problem of network selection" -- insert "the"
before "problem".
-Page 20: "more than one points" -- replace "points" with "point"


For 375, the ISP selection functionality no longer
appears to be in the PANA WG documents, so I
would suggest removing the relevant text from
this document.

376 through 378 are yours, Bernard.

Jari

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