eap Mailing List: Re: review of netsel-05

[Bernard Aboba (bernard_aboba]

I have resolved issues 330, 331, 332, 334, 335 and 336 as fixed in  
NETSEL-05.  I am assuming that 333 will be resolved in -06.

That still leaves Issues 374, 375, 376, 377, and 378 open.

Can the submitters of those issues look over the document and post whether 
their concerns have been resolved?

The document is available for inspection here:
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-eap-netsel-problem-05.txt

> Jari Arkko said:

> First, there are some open issues in the issue tracker. I consider
> issues 330-336 now mostly closed, based on the revisions in the new
> drafts. Thanks. For issue 333 there is one small remaining thing,
> noted below.
>
> What is the situation with the other issues? They have
> been made for previous revisions, have they been resolved
> in -05?
>
> I also re-read the document and noticed two small editorial
> issues, also noted below.
>
> But otherwise I think the document is ready. Ship it!
>
> Parts remaining from issue 333:
>
> >    Section 4 gives the conclusions
> >    and some suggestions on how to proceed for the rest.
> This should be: "Section 4 presents our conclusions."
>
> Editorial:
>
> >    discussion of the limitations of certain classes of solution,
>
> s/solution/solutions/
>
>
> > The solution ...
>
> Multiple occurrences of this. I think the draft should
> not assume that we have a single solution in this space.
> Therefore, we should typically write "Solutions should
> satisfy ... " as opposed to "The solution should satisfy ..."