eap Mailing List: review of netsel-05

[Jari Arkko (jari.arkko]

First, there are some open issues in the issue tracker. I consider
issues 330-336 now mostly closed, based on the revisions in the new
drafts. Thanks. For issue 333 there is one small remaining thing,
noted below.

What is the situation with the other issues? They have
been made for previous revisions, have they been resolved
in -05?

I also re-read the document and noticed two small editorial
issues, also noted below.

But otherwise I think the document is ready. Ship it!

Parts remaining from issue 333:

>    Section 4 gives the conclusions
>    and some suggestions on how to proceed for the rest.
This should be: "Section 4 presents our conclusions."

Editorial:

>    discussion of the limitations of certain classes of solution,

s/solution/solutions/


> The solution ...

Multiple occurrences of this. I think the draft should
not assume that we have a single solution in this space.
Therefore, we should typically write "Solutions should
satisfy ... " as opposed to "The solution should satisfy ..."