eap Mailing List: Re: WGLC on EAP Network Selection Document

[M. Vanderveen (mvandervn]

The draft is a good summary of the network selection problem.

I wonder if there is a plan to update this document after the various SDOs make some progress in this area. Overall it looks good to go.

 

 

Some editorials:

- Page 4: "The selection is dependent upon for example the
      authentication credentials for the user / device and the roaming
      agreements."  If there are no other factors that selection is dependent on

(besides that mentioned in the sentence immediately following this one), then

remove the "for example".

 

- Page 4: "The selection will be dependent upon for
      example the support for an access technology by the device and
      availability of such access technology based networks."

      Same comment as above.

 

- Page 15: "APs must support 802.1X pre-authentication (optional

in IEEE 802.11i) ". The year of this standard should be specified,

just like it is earlier in that sentence. What is meant here is

probably IEEE 802.11i-2004.

 

- Page 20: "solutions for problem of network selection" -- insert "the"

before "problem".

 

-Page 20: "more than one points" -- replace "points" with "point"

 

Michaela

 

 

 

Bernard Aboba <bernard_aboba [at] hotmail.com> wrote:

> No comments were received on the EAP Network Selection document during EAP
>  
> WG last call.
>
> This makes it difficult to tell whether this is because lots of people read 
> it and could not find fault with it, or because few people read it.
>
> Therefore in order to move the document forward, we are going to request 
> that individuals who have read the document post to the list to indicate 
> that they approve its publication. If you have read it and have comments, 
> please post these to the list as well. In order to move forward, we will 
> need at least 5 people (other than the authors and WG chairs) to indicate 
> approval.
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