Re: Issue: AAA-Key Section 1.2
From: Jari Arkko (jari.arkkopiuha.net)
Date: Mon, 8 May 2006 08:57:16 -0700 (PDT)
Narayanan, Vidya wrote:

>    Submitter name: Vidya Narayanan
>    Submitter email address: vidyan [at] qualcomm.com
>    Date first submitted: 5/01/2006
>    Reference: 
>    Document: Keying Framework
>    Comment type: 'E'ditorial
>    Priority: '2' May fix 
>    Section: 1.2
>    Rationale/Explanation of issue: 
>Given that the term AAA-Key is not used elsewhere in the document, it
>would be good to add a sentence clarifying that the definition is
>provided as a clarification to the terminology used in older documents
>and that it is no longer used.  
>  
>
Fine, but...

>Add to AAA-Key definition: 
>
>"This term is no longer used to refer to the MSK in this document.
>  
>
This text could be understood so that the term refers to something
else instead. I would suggest "This term is no longer used in this
document."

--Jari



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