CAPWAP IESG Review Comment E1
From: Pat Calhoun (pacalhou) (pcalhouncisco.com)
Date: Wed, 18 Jun 2008 17:26:30 -0700 (PDT)
All,

Here is the IESG Review Comment:

   E1 - In the Abstract section, please eliminate the phrase 'The CAPWAP
protocol 
   meets the IETF CAPWAP working group protocol requirements.' or
replace it with 
   something that points to a reference less ephemeral than the CAPWAP
WG. 

I have changed the sentence to:

<text>
Abstract
[...]
   The CAPWAP protocol meets the Objectives for Control and
   Provisioning of Wireless Access Points (CAPWAP) [RFC4564].
</text>
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