Capwap Mailing List: Re: CAPWAP IESG Review Comment E9

[Romascanu, Dan (Dan) (dromasca]

OK with me, I would even add a THAT between 'determines' and 'the
software'. 

Dan
 

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Pat Calhoun (pacalhou) [mailto:pcalhoun [at] cisco.com] 
> Sent: Wednesday, June 18, 2008 8:21 AM
> To: capwap [at] frascone.com
> Subject: [Capwap] CAPWAP IESG Review Comment E9
> 
> All,
> 
> Here is the IESG Review Comment:
> 
>    E9. Section 2.3, page 24 - the following phrase does not compile
> well:
>    'The WTP enters the Image Data state when it receives a 
> successful Join Response 
>    message and determines and the included Image Identifier 
> message element is not the 
>    same as its currently running image.'
> 
> I agree. I am proposing changing the text to the following:
> 
> <text>
>      The WTP enters the Image Data state when it receives a
>      successful Join Response message and determines the
>      software version in the Image Identifier message element
>      is not the same as its currently running image.
> </text>
> 
> PatC
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